Our Wonderland: Arc 5 Part 1 Out Now!


GOLLY BOB HOWDY, IT'S HERE! Tuck your shirts into your shorts because the first half of Arc 5 is RIPPING ITS WAY ONTO AN ITCH PAGE NEAR YOU YEAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH.

WHAT'S THAT, CARROT? I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WERE RELEASING ARC 5 IN TWO PARTS????

Well,  I am. SURPRISE.

Actually not really a huge surprise I already talked about it in this here devlog, so I'm not really gonna go back over the decision to do so in detail here that would make my already-longwinded posts even more of a chore to read. But in case you didn't see that post and don't want to put up with my ridiculous drivel any longer than you have to, the long and short of it is that Arc 5 was just getting Too Large (like two arcs' worth large), so I've AXED it right up the middle to create two dinner-sized plates of dubious delight. And by axed up the middle what I actually mean is I just stopped and decided to release what I had since it was already submerging me softly with its oVeRwHeLmInG sIzE.

AT ANY RATE.  Enough about that.

Time for The Goods™.

WHAT CAN YOU EXPECT IN THIS (HALF)ARC?

Just what has happened so far in Carrot's Tale of Woe? Well, Iggy has taken 100+ tree tumbles down into Wonderland, died in a variety of delightful (and not so delightful) ways,  attempted with varying degrees of success to understand his friends better and fix all their problems like the Great Friend he is, fallen in love(???), and learned a bit (a lot) about himself in the process. BUT NOW SOMETHING IS DIFFERENT. Right? Right.

YES. That's because, if you'll remember from the end of Arc 4 (yes, I know that was a while ago now, but bear with me), Iggy has actually RETAINED all of his memories. You heard it right—all the times he was beaten, bamboozled, broad-beaned, beset, besmirched, besieged, and borne witness to his own shortcomings and issues—they're all just crashin' around in his noggin'. How might this affect him? Well, you can probably hazard a guess. How might this affect the final trek down the tree? That one is maybe harder to hazard. Who can say. BUT YOU'LL KNOW SOON AS SOON AS YOU DOWNLOAD THIS BAD BOY AND START ERRRRRRRRRRRRR UP.

Dear god I'm literally losing it this devlog is already going off the rails.

ALL

RIGHT

THEN

Let's take a look at some of the nitty-gritty features ready to shellac their way straight into the folds of your brain:

  • 2 to 3 more hours of gameplay (around 40k words, bringing the running total up to aboutttttttt... 223k words HELP)
  • 59 NEW CGS??? HOLY COW! WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?
  • 1 new way to violently die! This may potentially be the last way to violently die within the game, I haven't decided yet, hmm...
  • Possibly the largest new soundtrack yet! A CINEMATIC TREAT FOR THE EARS!
  • More feels than you can shake a stick at!
  • SWEET SCENES? TERRIFYING SCENES??? EMOTIONALLY CATHARTIC SCENES????????
  • Lots and lots and lots of Iggy doll sprites (too many mayhaps)

BUT WAIT.

THERE'S MORE!

HOLY HECK IN A HAND BASKET. CARROT HAS ACTUALLY GONE IN AN ADDED SOME FEATURES THAT ALL REAL GAMES SHOULD HAVE (and had just been passively aggressively ignoring until now). Untwist your skivvies because it's time to pack them full of SWEET SWEET FEATURES.

Remember that CG gallery I mentioned I wasn't going to be adding yet? BANG! SURPRISE I LIED IT'S DONE I ADDED IT IT'S IN THE GAME NOW check it out in all its sweet glory hohohohohohoho:


DON'T EVER SAY I NEVER DID ANYTHING FOR YOU because this literally took me hours and hours... and hours........... of work.......... but.... it's done now............ which is what matters.......... in the end........... really...........

Anyway, it's divided up by arc for ~ easy viewing ~ Making this is also when I realized I 1) have way too many CGs LAWL and 2) for some odd reason had not been counting like half of each arc's CGs towards the total CG count for the game AND I DON'T KNOW WHY? Because in my head I'd arbitrarily categorized them as "the ending sequences" despite that literally meaning nothing and they're still just a bunch of CGs???? So you'll notice that I've now updated the total CG count to..... uh.... 337! Which is over a hundred more than it would have been otherwise. My god.

I do have to apologize, though, because all the images will be locked??? Even if you have already played the game. There wasn't much I could do in that regard, because it was either that or have them all just be unlocked, but then where's the fun in that??? If you have already played all the previous arcs, though, it doesn't take long to just fast-forward through the whole game and unlock everything I did it myself many times to unlock them myself and make sure everything was working trololol. (Also maybe you'll discover there were some you were missing all along hmmmMMMMMMMM???)

What else what else what else...

OH YES. A brand-spanking-new MUSIC ROOM:


If you go to the About page now, you can actually click on a song to listen! I hope this will make it much easier to find and listen to your fav songs (and by fav songs I mostly mean all the tracks heavily associated with Orlam because those are the ones I get asked about the most LKADJFLSDK).

THAT'S NOT ALL THOUGH! There are also........ TWO NEW MODES!

The first is one I've been wanting to do for a while, which is a Censored Mode. This mode is for everyone who might be interested in the game and story but is a bit squeamish when it comes to gore (or just generally would prefer not to see it). NOW YOU CAN CENSOR IT! Censored Mode spot-pixelates the graphic gore shown in some of the CGs, namely, things like severed limbs, intestines, and so on. I've tried to do it in such a way that you can still follow along with what's happening in the CGs, you just won't see the gory bits. Do note, however, that it doesn't censor stuff like blood and minor injuries, nor does it censor any textual descriptions of the gore. This is still, at heart, quite a v-v-violent game in that regard. But this mode can certainly take the edge off of things for those that want it!

Along with this is what I'm referring to as Streaming Mode. This will probably not affect very many people at all, but I've added it just in case. As you likely already know, the music in this game comes from a variety of different sources—royalty-free music that was either free to use or that I paid a subscription or license fee to use in-game. Mostly, this has always been completely fine and caused no issues. However, one particular site that I was using early on in my Music Scouting Endeavors has all of its tracks added to the YouTube copyright flags... list... (or whatever it's called) and will demonetize any videos using its music that aren't on a channel owned by the person who bought the subscription/license. While typically fine if you're a YT content creator making your own vids using the music, this doesn't work as well for games, where any vids made of the game will most likely be created and uploaded by, well, not me! LOL SO LONG STORY SHORT—this mode decreases the volume during those specific songs while playing the game (there are 4 tracks in question) so that if you want to record gameplay and monetize your vids, you don't have to worry about those vids getting demonetized. (Needless to say, I have learned my lesson since and stopped using that site for music once figuring out some of these issues...)

A FEW LAST TINY THINGS:

I have added arc and chapter titles in so that your save files will be labeled better! Hopefully, this will make it much easier to track your save files across the different arcs, since this game IS quite long by this point...

ALSO! I have optimized all the music files (by that I mean I have converted them all to opus files—which knocked over 100MB off the final build???).   Lovely! However, because of this, you may receive a Ren'Py error when loading any previous saves that were saved at a point when a music file was actively playing. Don't worry, though—simply hit "Ignore" on the error screen and you'll still be able to use all your old saves just fine (they just will be music-less until the next music track starts in-game).

ALSO ALSO. A few little config updates—you can now toggle auto-forward on and off using the A key! For those who don't want to keep clicking through, this will make it easier to sit back and simply read. You can also now roll back a line using the B key! You could always roll back using the Page Up key, but my keyboard is broken and I can't use that key, so I self-indulgently added the B key as an additional option. Who knows, maybe someone else will benefit from it too, so I left it in LOL

OK I think that's.............. finally it as far as random new updates goes. BUT I HOPE YOU'LL LIKE THEM. See, Carrot is learning how to make a better game experience! Just... very slowly. By the time the full game is out maybe this will be an actually somewhat respectable visual novel aldkfjasld or not

GOD I NEED TO STOP RAMBLING. LET'S MOVE ON.

The install for Arc 5 should be the same as for all the previous arcs.

  • If you haven't played Our Wonderland before: You don't need to do anything special! Just download the game and play from the beginning.
  • If you have played Our Wonderland before and have a save file: Download the new Arc 5 Part 1 version of the game and start 'er up. Probably, you won't need to do anything else (because Ren'Py keeps persistent save data from your games). However, if for whatever reason, you don't see any of your old saves, copy over the "saves" folder from your previous version of the game, and paste that into the "game" folder of the new version of the game:

If you can't remember which save file should be your Gateway to Arc 5, it should look like this!!!

You'll know everything is workin' ship-shape if as soon as you load up that save file, the screen says "Arc 5" instead of "To be continued..."

LAST BUT NOT LEAST, WE AS ALWAYS HAVEEEEEEEEEE...

Arc 5 abides by the same general content warnings as the rest of the game, which include:

  • Strong adult language
  • Strong graphic violence (both illustrated and textual)
  • Sexual violence/assault/unwanted sexual advances
  • Disturbing and potentially triggering elements

I'm also adding in a handful of new general warnings specifically for this arc, similar to what I did for Arcs 3 and 4! These include:

  • Arachnophobia
  • Brief moment of eye strain
  • Brief dialogue on eating disorder topics
  • Scenes revolving around childbirth and gender roles

And, as always, here is the more-detailed breakdown of content warnings! These contain spoilers for obvious reasons, so don't click if you don't want to see. If you're at all concerned about the general content warnings, I do recommend checking them out just in case:

Arc 5 Detailed Content Warnings
  • Strong graphic violence (someone is eaten by giant rabbits, a giant rabbit is stabbed in the neck with a screwdriver repeatedly, one rabbit eats another rabbit, someone is repeatedly stabbed through the chest with a large sharp object and the descriptions are quite graphic, someone is stabbed with many sharp objects)
  • Sexual violence/assault/unwanted sexual advances (references are made in dialogue to past sexual assault attempts, someone is stabbed through the chest and sexual references are made re: the erotic factor of the act in dialogue, sexual acts are implied through dialogue to have been conducted with artificially intelligent dolls)
  • Disturbing and potentially triggering elements (rabbit cannibalism, someone has transformed into a grotesque half-creature, mentions in narration of past torture and death in previous arcs, a somewhat intense scene of trying to snap someone out of a distraught daze by slapping them, an emotionally charged scene involving slapping someone to snap them out of their intrusive self-deprecating and self-damaging thoughts)
  • Arachnophobia (mentions of spiders and spider webs in dialogue and narration, someone has transformed into a large half-spider-like creature, references are made to baby spiders in eggs, someone is caught in a large spider web and can't escape)
  • Brief moment of eye strain (an inverted image is shown near the beginning of the arc and lasts for several minutes of narration)
  • Brief dialogue on eating disorder topics (mentions in dialogue of not eating and how this has led to an "ideal figure" though done in a negative light)
  • Scenes revolving around childbirth and gender roles (someone who has been transformed into a half-spider gives birth to a spider egg [not shown, but the egg is shown afterwards], dialogue about the need to create a family and have children, dialogue about the pressures of perfection, particularly on women)

Don't hesitate to reach out if you have any questions about anything! I am always happy to provide even more details about any particular scenes you might be worried about or provide screenshots, etc.

AND THAT'S THAT, CHAPS.

PLEASE TO BE ENJOYING THE FIRST HALF OF ARC 5.

Now to go start working on the second half...................

.....BUT WAIT.

I may possibly be doing the O2A2 Queer Edition jam from April 7th to April 22nd. The point of this jam is to create something short and small and simple (you can only use one of each asset), so I thought it might be a nice short little break to create something small and fun after the launch and before I get too deep back into the production for the rest of Arc 5. Haven't made the final decision yet, but we shall see. If I do, the idea I have bonking around in the noggin involves a tiny little self-indulgent OW side game involving text messages LOL I'll let you wonder about what that could entail for now, and if I do end up doing it, I guess you'll get to see for real.

ANYWAY.

TOODLE-OO FOR REAL THIS TIME.


Sneak peek of Arc 5 Part 2 or something LMAO.

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ITS HERRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEE!! Amazing work im just os oso happy thagt arc 5 (part one) got releaseD EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE 

((spoilers)) exellent job! the art is amazing, i lovelvoelvolevoe Gidget's development (sorry this sounds so dumb lol)

AJHJAHJAKS I'M SO HAPPYYY!! thank you so much for all of your work!!! <33Let's Fucking Go Ball | Know Your Meme

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LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OMG πŸ€£πŸ’¦

I HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY IT?????????????????? πŸ₯ΊπŸ’•

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you cannot even comprehend how hyped I really am
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DLKJAFLSDKFJALSDFJAKSDL HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I JUST BURST OUT LAUGHING HELPPPPPPPP

God I hope you will enjoy it though DLAKJFSDLKAF I have a lot of FEELS built up in this (half)arc πŸ₯ΊπŸ’¦πŸ’•

oh nooo i was super exited but i got a new computer and i dont have any of my old saves :'''(. I really dont wanna have to go through the last four arcs again but i will if i have to </3

OH NO??? That is awful ahhh dlakjdlf If it helps, you can turn on the "Skip Unseen Text" option in the menu and then skip through everything relatively quickly. There are a few parts where you won't be able to skip, but it would certainly be faster than actually replaying everything all the way through πŸ€£πŸ’¦

thank youuuu :') congratulations on the release btw! 

Oh, thank you very much!!! I hope you'll like it!! πŸ₯°

Man, this was an amazing first part. Just too much to write about. Though I will do my best to note the parts I liked and disliked the most.

I really liked how Cecil ends up being contrasted between Iggy in that Cecil is the better friend to Gidget than Iggy is, his selflessness contrasted against Iggy's selfishness...even though he's slowly coming to terms with that. The attention to detail in the writing, like how pre-revelation (as in "before their final confrontation with Cecil") Gidget described instructing the Iggy dolls as "programming" them instead of, say, "commanding" them. The "we're not doing 'lethal vs. non-lethal' choices again, you sadist" joke made me laugh hard :D . I also like how you took the animation lessons you learned from Our Fantastic Wonderland and applied them here - the novel has never looked so animated.

Speaking of which, shame no-one seems to remember the events of Our Fantastic Wonderland. Having Orlam, now surely fully-aware of Wonderland's abilities, take his revenge on Jerry for, just one loop, taking over his self-made role of King of Wonderland would be F U N. In an Orlam kind of way. That and Hunar revealing he and Bucks used to play D&D together would've clicked more with Iggy, being like, "Oh, so that's why one of the loops had Wonderland become a D&D session," and in hindsight, making Our Fantastic Wonderland akin to a standalone Bucks arc.

Speaking of Orlam, darn you, crispy critter! You made me think, at first, Orlam had something to do with Gidget's out-of-character acting being a result of his interference rather than something self-inflicted, what with her (that's what I'm pronoun-ing pre-revelation Gidget so as not to confuse myself) mannerisms, way of speaking, and the choice of music being suspiciously similar to the choices used for Orlam's.

On a minor note, it's a shame there weren't more sound effects in parts. Though I do understand that the (likely) very tight budget regarding third-party asset licensing for the assets you can't get for free likely is a factor there.

Finally, given the intro narration to this arc, I can't help but wonder if there'll be a choice to make at the end: chop down the tree because we humans are inherently flawed, and the poor tree needs to be put out of its misery, or have Bucks surrender the baby to the tree, no blood sacrifice needed, so 1) the baby can be raised by a better parent (sorry, Bucks :( ), and 2) so it can heal and maybe figure out how to live in a world of flawed, guilty, and impure humans?

Looking forward to the conclusion!!!

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Ahhhhhh I am glad!!! I was quite worried for multiple reasons with this part, not only because it's just a half-arc so I was worried ppl would be disappointed, but also because of the return to some of the more fantastical stuff. Then again, I worry and fret about literally every release, so maybe it was not really any different than normal πŸ€£πŸ’¦

""we're not doing 'lethal vs. non-lethal' choices again, you sadist" joke made me laugh hard " --> LMAO I'M GLAD YOU GOT A CHUCKLE OUT OF THAT. I was hoping it would get at least a few laughs as it quite amused me while making it πŸ€­

"I also like how you took the animation lessons you learned from Our Fantastic Wonderland and applied them here - the novel has never looked so animated." --> Oh, that's really nice, I'm glad you think so πŸ˜­πŸ’• I definitely spent a whole heck of a lot more time scripting and setting up scenes in this arc than I have in the previous ones and trying to just really make it feel cinematic and engaging as much as I could. I'm sure I still have plenty more to learn, but I'm glad it's at least noticeable that I'm getting better LOL

"shame no-one seems to remember the events of Our Fantastic Wonderland. " --> I ADMIT I WANTED TO ADD MORE REFS THAN I DID. But I was also slightly worried if I did TOO many big refs, ppl who haven't played OFW might get confused (it has like 1/4 the plays of the main game after all, so I imagine many people haven't played it LOL). That being said, Jerry will definitely play a new and large role in part 2, and I'm quite excited about it. I hope it will be fun πŸ€­

"and the choice of music being suspiciously similar to the choices used for Orlam's." --> LMAO some of this is probably the result of my using a lot of the same music from the same composers. Actually a lot of the music from this arc in particular came from a new composer I used a lot of music for in OFW, so there is probably also some similarity there, as well. Though it's true also the Gidget in this arc does start to take on an air that's more similar to Orlam because of the emphasis on pomp and perfection LOL (so then it'll be curious how Orlam turns out in part 2 teehee).

"very tight budget regarding third-party asset licensing for the assets you can't get for free likely is a factor there." --> GUHH,,, this is indeed the case with sound effects. Basically the only budget I have available goes into music licenses and subscriptions. All my sound effects just come from searching on freesound.org—which, while great and does have some really great sounds that I've been able to use, is still quite limited in the amount (and quality.......) of sounds available, so I'm not always able to find the exact types of sounds I want. And I admit when I can't really find the exact thing, I tend to give up LOL I remember there being a few scenes in particular I wasn't able to great sounds to match what I wanted. Though I was happy with how the rabbit chase scene and creaky boat scene turned out at least lasdkjfas πŸ’¦ Maybe in the future if I'm ever able to actually have a budget for a game, I'll be able to get higher-quality custom sounds. GOD, that would be the dream,,,

INDEED, HOW WILL IT END?? πŸ€­ I hope the final conclusion will end up being satisfactory to people, especially after all this build-up. I have the major beats of it planned out in my mind, as always, but I often don't know exactly how things will align in the narration and how all the beats will come together on paper until I actually get to that point and write it. It makes it both exciting but also nerve-racking for me I must admit LOL But it's done me well so far I guess πŸ€£πŸ’¦

AT ANY RATE, I AM GLAD YOU LIKED IT. Thanks so much as always for playing and for leaving all of your thoughts! I always enjoy reading them!!!!! And I'll keep working hard to get the next and final part (FINALLY) finished!! LOL

looooooook what a surprise for the day!!!

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A LOVELY WEEKEND TREAT πŸ€­πŸ’•

i havent read the devlog yet but judging from how long it is i know i need to prepare myself because its gonna hit me like a bucket-wheel excavator Bagger 288.

LMAOOOOOO IT'S SO LONG BECAUSE I'M PHYSICALLY INCAPABLE OF WRITING SHORT DEVLOGS πŸ’¦πŸ’¦πŸ’¦

There are indeed a lot of feels and Moments in this one though GOD. I-I hope you'll like it πŸ₯ΊπŸ’¦πŸ’•

I wonder whether Orlam's part will appear in part 1 <3

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Yey!!! A long story for Orlam. I love it! Just can't wait for part 2 ;)

I'm really excited to work on it!!!! Heheh still a lot of Big Moments to cover~ πŸ€­πŸ’• I will do my best!!

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JIJNUHBUB IM SO EXCITEDDDDDDDDDDD!!!! I have high hopes for this!

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HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I HOPE YOU'LL LIKE ITTTTTTT!!! πŸ₯ΊπŸ’•

HHHHHHHHH YOU STORYTELLING MASTER!!!!!!!! I LOVE ITTTT! ❀ You beautiful, wonderful person who tells amazing stories... you're the best!!!!!!!!!!!

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DhdhfhfEJDJDJDUD I AM SO GLAD????? πŸ˜­πŸ’• AHHHHH THANK YOU I don't know what to say LMAO πŸ’¦