I love this!! I played the main game first and adored Genzou/Iggy there and this was such lovely further insight into their relationship :') It makes me want to replay the main game again! You've crafted some beautifully realistic charas here and I can't wait to see more of them, thank you so much for sharing your work!!!
Awwww thank you very much??? AHHHH YOU PLAYED THE MAIN GAME TOO??? I am extremely touched lkajdfad I am glad you like Genzou and Iggy, they are extremely precious to me LOL Hearing that others like them too squishes my heart 🥺💦💕 Your words mean so much and are going to make me cry just a little bit, so I'll just say thank you so much for playing and for letting me know!! It means the world!! 💕
OH GOSH I'M SORRY YOU GOT DITCHED AT THE END LAKDJFALSKDFA
I-it's a delicate balance trying to get the good end LOL Though if you get the text on December 23rd, you've basically almost got it, you just need to not rush him or say something sarcastic in the last couple of choices hahahaha
LOL they were best friends growing up and in high school, but drifted apart a bit after Iggy went away to college and also because Iggy's not very good at keeping up with relationships and so generally doesn't reach out on his own 💦 It's mostly Genzou trying to keep up the convos because he's hopelessly in love with him tho at the same time assuming/accepting that it will never work out but still trying because he just can't quite let it go and also generally still wanting to be a part of Iggy's life no matter what lkajdfas
(Admittedly also I would have liked to include more convos in between the ones given but I was limited by the word count, so had to just choose the most important ones to keep the story going.)
Short, sweet and cute visual novel in which you text your ace best friend, a guy whom you have a crush on. It's free, browser-based and charmingly written to fit some interesting constraints. 5/5 stars - outstanding.
Oh my gosh, thank you very much????? I'm glad that you enjoyed it!! That's such high praise and I feel honored to be given such a high score in your eyes 🥺💕 Thank you very much for playing and for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful write-up! It really means a lot!! 🥰
So, I finally played it. It doesn't feel like 1000 (sorry, 991) words at all and I'm simply blown away by how simultaneously long and short it seems compared to how long it actually is. The texts are amazing but also gave me The Feels so obviously now I have to give it a bad review and leave to cry (for legal reasons, this is a joke)
LMAO MAYBE BECAUSE I TRIED TO SQUISH THE SENTENCES AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE using like text speak dkljadkfa I admittedly did spend a lot of time towards the end comparing my current word count with what I still had left to do and cutting down words from sentences or extraneous lines to make room for where I needed others. IT WAS A BALANCING ACT 🤣💦 For real tho I wish I could have written a lot more as I was having so much fun with it and had ideas for a variety of other days' worth of convos that I had to forego.
ANYWAYS THO THANK YOU FOR PLAYING AHHHHHHHHHH. I AM SORRY FOR THE FEELS™ It gave me a lot of feels too while working on it and I may have choked up a little bit the first time I play-tested the last part guhhHHHHH. I just have.
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I am glad you enjoyed it though in spite of the Emotional Attack. Thank you so much for playing and taking the time to write up your thoughts I shall weep kjfadkfa 🥺💕
Oh, my gosh! Thank you very much??????? Help this is such high praise lakjdlfaskdjfa 😭💦💕 That is such an incredibly sweet and nice thing to say, thank you!!!! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it (and my other stuff, too kaldjfalkdsfa) Thank you for all your support ahhhhh,,, 🥺💕
This is so cute! I love how the story's presented - the texting with the authentic-feeling pauses, then the spoken dialog in the dark, and finally the sprite and full dialog bubbles - such a special moment, to see the scene and sprite!
Even just in text message form, you could really get the personalities of each character. I really liked all the different responses that Iggy may send depending on what you (Genzou) chooses to say. My favourite was the birthday text, where he texts you the next day if you don't mention it.
I was curious about the other ending, so I played through a few times (totally loving all the potential responses), and I thought it felt pretty realistic. You can see why Iggy may have distanced himself or felt uncomfortable based on past texts. The characters just feel real!
This is the first time I've come across your work and I absolutely love it, and I can't wait to play Our Wonderland to get more of these guys! (I love dark horror-fantasy games!)
Oh my gosh, thank you??? That means so much 😭💕 I'm really glad you thought it felt very realistic!! That was one of my goals with trying to set up the texting screen to have some more of the like, notifs, and the wait time, and animations and such. So I'm glad some of that got across??? (Even if making it completely realistic would be mostly impossible and annoy people LMAO) I'm especially glad you liked the dialogue, I really had a lot of fun with it -- trying to translate their characters into their text speak and just making myself laugh a little bit with some of the funny and sweet interactions. I wish I could have had a bit more room to come up with even more, but the jam word count limitation stopped me LOL Maybe in the future though...
Ahhhhh oh my gosh you even played through all the choices I shall cry???? I wanted to provide a wide variety of different choices so I could have different types of convos play out and the endings (either good or bad) felt like they made sense, so that honestly makes me really happy to hear lkdajflak I'm so glad you liked the chars in general!!! I love them so much and think about them all the time 💦
AHHHHHH IF YOU DO PLAY IT I HOPE YOU'LL LIKE IT??? The main game, I mean. It's definitely a different vibe LOL but it has a bunch of these two in it, particularly around their relationship and also a lot about Iggy figuring himself out (sometimes through quite horrific means, but still...) I made this little short game because these two make me so happy and I just wanted to make something short and sweet for them as part of the jam 🥺💕
Thank you so much again for playing and for this lovely comment that just really made my day!!!!! And also if you do play OW I hope it will be enjoyable lakdjfasd 🥰💕
I forgot to comment here lmao. THIS IS SOOOO GOOODDD!!!!!! I love Genzou/Iggy sosososososooooo muuuch!!! It was a bit funny to play considering I text like Genzou but act like Iggy. I will not leave my house even if it costs me my life, but I'll be damned if I don't send cryptic/annoying texts to the people I like. Also the cg was so cute! Nothing makes me happier than Genzou abd Iggy content so thank you, truly. Also congrats on creating The Ace Character. Iggy is the ace character ever for sure. I'm sorry this is incoherent, my brain is broken. Keep up the awesome work and take care of yourself!
HHHHHHH THANK YOOOOOOOULFKA JDKDFLDKFALDSJFAKDS I LOVE THEM TOO GUHHHHH... knowing that other people also love them fills me with a deluge of fiery tears that spew forth from my eyeballs in bursts of uncontrollable emotion lakdjfa 😭💦💕
GOD FELT I NEED TO LEAVE THE HOUSE MORE but I d-d-don't...
I'm really glad you liked it??? Thank you so much for playing and also this comment that is giving me life. Sometimes I just think about Genzou and Iggy and my eyes get moist. HELP THE ACE CHARACTER EVER FOR SURE god that is very high praise dlkajd I am glad that Iggy can be such a shining example of an awkward ace guy 🥺
This was fun!!! I like how the pauses in the game forces you to slow down and rly adds to the feeling of it being a real-time texted convo! Despite the pressure of waiting for a text and my bad habit of being a chronic ghoster lol it also kinda made me want to message my own friends again :P
I fumbled a few of the choices here and there (and also wanted to see what Iggy's response would be to some of them) so I played a few times! I really liked genzou's birthday text scenes!!!! if you don't remind iggy he texts you the next day first and idk i just thought that was a nice touch!! Especially as someone who has had this convo (being iggy) with ppl multiple times lol
The transition from texting into irl with the snow was also wonderfully done too! And then how the menu screen changed!!! it made me smile :D
AHHHHH!!! Thank you so much for playing!!! And I'm really glad you liked it?? I definitely want to like... force a sort of slow-down, like, to give at least some semblance of a real texting experience and how it doesn't usually happen bam bam bam in a row. Though at the same time I didn't want to make it too annoying and slow it down too much, so I tried to find somewhat of a balance that I hoped would be ok 🤣💦 But I'm glad!! AND LOL I AM ALSO REALLY THE WORST WHEN IT COMES TO TEXTING. Which is where a lot of Iggy's side of the convos and his reactions came from tbh... 💦
Oh I'm glad you like the birthday scenes laksdjflakds those were some of my favorites, especially Iggy's flustered series of rapid-fire texts if you don't remind him LKDJALFKDS it still makes me laugh just thinking about it LOL I am also very bad at remembering birthdays and then feel guilty.
Ahhhhh and thank you!! I hoped the final scene transitioning to RL would feel very special after the texting part. It definitely made my heart squish a lot.
HHHHH just thank you again so much!! I feel very touched that you played the game and took the time to write up this comment!! It means a lot!! 🥰💕
I've just finished this game and it was really cool and wholesome I loved it !!! As an ace person it really made my heart melt and it was very very sweet.
I shared it around so that more people can play it ! The text bubbles and their animation and the "shit shit shit" part were really well craftet I'm impressed haha. The pictures at the end were cute and iI really like the design of the characters.
I'll check out your other games for sure, keep on doing them !
Ahhhhh thank you for playing??? I'm really glad you ended up enjoying it!! That means so much! Especially as a fellow ace hhhHhhhhhnnn,,, 🥺💕
OH MY GOD REALLY? OHHHHHH. You are too kind HELP. That is so sweet. And lol thank you!! I was really happy with Genzou's anxious "shits" LOLOL 🤣💦 I wanted a good way to get across his flustered second-guessing in a way that didn't take away from the texting itself and that felt a bit funny.
Thank you so so much!! It means a lot that you would play my game, and I'm just so happy you liked it! 🥰
this was so cute!!! the ending was so cute, i hope the lads got their food hahaha. huge fan of the changes in scene made possible between the texting interface, dialogue bubbles in the dark, and then the snowy background+sprite... i think it's a really cool way of doing something with the limitations!! + i too would be head over heels for someone who brought me a hot drink on a snowy day tbh <3. very sweet!!! (+ the artstyle is very fun too!!)
OhhhHHHHhhhhhhHHHH thank you very much!!! 🥺💕 I'm really glad you liked it?? LOL I HOPE SO, TOO. I like to imagine they did 😌 Re: the changing UI/scene stuff, I really had to think sometimes about the best way to set things up and make them feel "right" in my mind with the limited stuff I could do GUH so I'm glad you enjoyed that?? And I wanted the final ending to feel a bit special by having it be the only time you get to see a sprite,,,💕
SAME TBH. Maybe interjected too many of my not-so-secret self-indulgent weaknesses into here just a bit LOL
Anyway though I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks so much for playing and for leaving such a lovely comment! It really brightened my day!! 🥰
This was such a sweet and endearing game! The dialogue flowed so smoothly and helped give me an idea of the personalities of both characters with how unique their individual ways of speaking were.
And when I was able to see Iggy in person after saying all the right things, that was certainly a perfect way to end the game! The way you can see Iggy's nervousness show through his poses, as well as expressions, was a lovely touch to his sprite :> And the main menu image changing was very clever and a fun reward along with seeing Iggy in person! Overall, I can tell with all the unique GUI, speech bubbles, animations, and said main menu that you put a lot of love and heart into this, very well done!
Oh, gosh, this is so sweet!!! Thank you so much for playing and writing up all these lovely thoughts??? It means so much 🥺💕 I'm really glad you enjoyed their back-and-forths!! I had a lot of fun converting their normal interactions into texting form and thinking about how that might work LOL And ahhhhhh I'm happy you like the Iggy sprite! I thought it might be a cute way to have the good ending play out despite the majority of the game being texting -- as like a special little treat or something aldkjfalk 🤭
Thank you very very much!! A LOT OF MY HEART DID INDEED GO INTO THIS. MAYBE TOO MUCH GUHHH. But I'm really happy you liked it!! Thank you for taking the time to write this up ahhhh it's so lovely,,, 😭💕
I loved this so much!! The personalities of Iggy and Genzou are so clear in their texting styles, and the animations are all very well done; it really mimics the experience of actually texting! The ending CG is so cute too, the characters are always so expressive! I only wish I was as suave as Genzou!
AHHHHHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PLAYING AND FOR THIS COMMENT. You've really made my day!!! This was so sweet, ahhhh... 😭💕 I'm glad you enjoyed their texting styles LOL I had a lot of fun transforming their chars into how I felt they would text (and was also mildly too entertained by it at times... makes me wish I could make a much longer game like this). And that you liked the animations!! It gave me such a headache finagling a way to set everything up in the backend to make that happen (and then also troubleshooting it later LOL).
LKDJALSKDFA GENZOU IS PRETTY SUAVE. AT TIMES. When he's not being a jerk or saying something ridiculous maybe LOL But he tries very hard and is very sweet to Iggy and I justttttt wanttttttt them to beeeeeeee happppyyyyyyyyyyyy GUHHHHHHH.
Thank you so much again!! I'm really happy you played and enjoyed it!! 🥰💕
HAHAHAHAHA that just made me choke from laughter a bit 🤣💦 I'm glad you enjoyed it ahhhhh, thank you so much for playing??? Happy I could provide such a Unique Exercise for you LOL 💕
I GET SO ANXIOUS WHEN TEXTING SO OFTEN so maybe part of me wanted to recreate that a bit alkdjflkdsf I'd love to think about ways to go even further with it in the future now that I've got a basic system coded, but also I worry about people getting annoyed if they can't click through relatively quickly, so it's like... finding a balance maybe LOL but I am glad some of that got across 🤣💦
GOSH THANK YOU THOUGH AHHHHHHHHH. That means so much I will cry 😭💕 The hardest part was figuring out how to actually make it work with the texting animations and paused moments since it required a lot of multiple screens being shown at the same time and disabling keys lakdsfa but once I finagled the code for it the rest went mostly faster. Thank you so much for playing!!! Your comment made me really happy ahhhhh,,, 🥺💕
OH MY GOSH THANK YOUUUUUUU. I am so glad!!! That means a lot to me to hear ldkajflsdkfa I'm really happy you liked it, ahhhhh. Thank you for playing and letting me know!! 😭💕
Oh gosh, thank you very much ahhhh!! 💕 I'm really glad you liked the game and that you like the art style?? I always worry if people will get turned off by the art style because it's a bit strange maybe LAKDJFLKAD Thank you so much for playing and for writing this comment! 🥰
That makes me so happy to hear, ahhhhhhhhh!!! I was really hoping other aces would be able to relate or at least get some happy feels from this, especially as there's still so few games and stories in general that feature ace chars. Thank you so much for playing and letting me know -- it really makes me wanna cry! 😭💕
OH YOU'VE EVEN PLAYED OW??? DLKAJSLKDFA omg 💦 that makes me really very happy dlkajfldska I'm so glad that you liked it and that you like Iggy. I love him so very much 💕 I WANT TO HUG HIM TOO OHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
This comment is so sweet, thank you so much for writing it!! It really brightened my day!! 💕
OMG?????? OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! I can see it though it's very small and I can't seem to open it any larger LMAOOOOO but he looks very cute? Ahhhhhhhh.... that makes me really happy that you would want to draw himmmmmm 😭💕
Hello I am a player from China, so the translator is used below! It took me a little time to type the good ending, and I would say this game is really nice, and I noticed how cute it is that the two people holding hands on the cover after the good ending,But because I have limited English reading skills and am still a student, I haven't fully played the other two works yet, but I will definitely give it a try later when I have time, no matter how,I support your interesting work XD
Oh, my gosh!! Thank you so much for playing?? Especially when it was probably difficult to read everything?? That feels incredibly sweet, ahhhh 😭💕 And I'm very glad you enjoyed it!! Thank you so so much for taking the time to play and write up this comment! I'm glad you liked the new title screen after getting the good ending, too!! 🥰
Oh gosh if you do play my other games I hope you'll like them, too!! I feel so honored that you would take the time to try and read all my stories lakdjfalsdkf 💕
Its a very good game and i hope you come out with another one continuing the story! The only negative i can say is i didn't notice the save until i had to restart, maybe autosaves would be good. But instead of that it was amazing! A nice challenge would be 3 choices!
Oh, thank you very much!!! That means so much ahhhh I'm very glad you enjoyed it!! 😭💕 While not a direct continuation, technically the main game these chars come from, Our Wonderland, takes place 3 years after this. It's quite a different vibe though as it's a horror game, but it does still delve a lot into the relationship between these two and also Iggy's figuring out and coming to terms with himself and his sexuality (the main game is from Iggy's POV).
Oh that's not a bad idea!! 🤔 I'm not sure how to implement that in Ren'Py but I feel like it must be doable! I'll look into how I might be able to integrate this into the game, perhaps for each choice screen or something...
LOL THREE CHOICES omg,,, that would certainly up the ante HAHAHA. Maybe if I ever revamp and expand on this game outside of the jam 1000 words restriction, I could try that, hehe. It would certainly add an additional level of difficulty! 🤭 Thank you again so much for playing and for leaving this lovely comment! It means a lot!! 🥰
Oh, my gosh jflkdfa that's such a sweet thing to say ahhhhh 😭💕 I'M GLAD??? I'm really happy you enjoyed it!! Thank you so much for playing, this comment squished my heart 🥺
LMAO I MEAN... I feel like it wasn't until high school that Genzou himself actually understood it as a crush rather than complicated feelings he couldn't quite explain LOL
I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE THE CHARS GUHHHHHH. And I hope you enjoy the game!!! It's very short, but I hope it can be something cute for people to enjoy 🥰💕
and YES I DID LOVE THE GAME! i wonder if whenever genzou says "shit shit shit shit!!" whenever you send something like "<3" a bad thing... or is it good???
I forgot he was blind too (idk how i forgot) until iggy was like "don't you use speech to text?"
This feels like a calm before the storm though... i have a feeling part 2 of chapter 5 is gonna be rough.. very scared... and excited!!!
AHHHHH I AM GLAD LDKJALSDKFJA Hahaha I think of those instances like... moments where Genzou thinks he has said something wrong. Oftentimes this indeed was not the best thing he could have said, but there are a few unavoidable ones towards the end (like when you ask to call Iggy, for instance) that aren't actually bad but just Genzou being unsure (since he's used to accidentally saying the wrong thing aldkfjads).
LOL TECHNICALLY THE <3 IS THE WRONG CHOICE IN THAT INSTANCE. But it's not like you have to do each choice perfectly to still get the good ending, so it's also OK to pick that too (and I do find that interaction incredibly hilarious LOL) 🤭💕
CALM BEFORE THE STORM. I guess it's true tho... part 2 is going to be rough lkdajflda I hope people can like this short, sweet little story as a breather perhaps 🥺💦
At any rate, I'm really glad you enjoyed this!! And thanks so much for writing up your thoughts, it was really sweet and made me smile!! 🥰
AHHHHHH I played The Game TM and im kind of shocked this is less than 1k words?? Like,,, it feels like you somehow put more words in (but in a good way!!!) because I feel like i clicked every option trying to get the good ending (I may or may not have chosen the Bad Options for Funsies first lol) and also just to enjoy Genzou's little "shit shit shit" drift across the screen
I can def tell this is a self-indulgent project bc like wow you put so much effort into everything from the gui to the visuals to the coding and workarounds of the limitations and ahhhHHHH im just impressed you just put this much work into it so fast!! Really feels like im roleplaying Genzou to talk to Iggy which feels so odd??? Because im so used to seeing things from Iggy's POV so taking on the role of Genzou somehow feels enlightening??? Also Iggy just,,, freaking out at missing Genzou's birthday makes me feel guilty for choosing the "talk about birthday" option over the "nothing" option the first go around (but also ahhhh it was so sweet how Iggy was just freaking out and Genzou's all chill about it like "no problem i get that" because Iggys' relatable as fuck in this regard and seeing Genzou react that way was just A+++)
also I really like the ending scene!! I was trying my best to get it bc i know it existed and awww it was cute!! love the use of snow particles for the atmosphere and also how the main menu changes when you get the correct option (and the little visual changes like when Genzou calls Iggy or goes "shit shit shit" like gfhjgfhj im a sucker for the effort you put into this ahhhHHHH)
(also!! just as a PS!! if you're worried about the web version breaking i played through on that edition and it works perfectly!! didn't encounter any problems whatsoever ^^)
LKJAFLDSKFASDLF IT DOES FEEL LIKE A LOT IG. It could be because I tried to squeeze as much as I could into shorter texting-format phrases. Also there are some places where I use variables for repeated/looped parts, which helped a bit, too. I painstakingly kept track of the words in a Gdoc as I was going and had to keep editing down some parts or deleting the extraneous word here and there so I could expand on other parts that felt like they needed more weight alkdjfad The forced pauses also make things feel a bit longer in general perhaps,,, 🤔
"I can def tell this is a self-indulgent project" --> ALSO BECAUSE IT'S JUST PURE GENZY FLUFF LAKDSJFALSKDFA But thank you tho ahhhhhh,,, I used a template for the base messaging system, but kept adding more to it because I wanted to make it feel more realistic to the point that there's like 4-5 different things happening on the screen that you can't even see but that are happening behind the scenes LOL I-it required a lot of troubleshooting lfakdjfa
"Because im so used to seeing things from Iggy's POV so taking on the role of Genzou somehow feels enlightening???" --> LOL IT'S TRUE. This is the first time I've ever done something in a different POV than Iggy's (or third-person), so I did wonder how people would take to it. I thought it would be kinda fun and cute though kinda spinning things around,,, 🥺💕
"also I really like the ending scene!!" --> HHH THANK YOU. I had hoped it would be a sufficient little "yay!" moment for people for getting to the end ldkajflskdf and of course not at all just me being even more self-indulgent and wanting to make a very cute and sweet scene that fits my exact aesthetic alkdjfasld I-I'm glad you enjoyed it 😭
Thank you so much for playing ahhhh this comment made me smile a lot and I loved hearing your thoughts!! Oh, and that's great!!! I had indeed been a bit nervous about whether or not it would work well or there could be glitches, but it at least seem to be working for most people, so that's good hahaha 🤣 Thank you again!!! 💕
God how do you keep on pumping out such amazing quality feel good games XD Loved it so much, just finished the good ending and wow you continue to show how much these dorky dweeby awkward boys deserve nice things. I love them so much. Every time the little shit shit shit animation came up I felt that, it's just like when I used to text my crushes XD
Hope you're doing well and wish you all the luck in your next game installment (even if it isn't an our wonderland related endevour)
KFLAJDSLKFJLSADKF FEEL GOOD GAMES?????????? HELPPPPPP this is sending me a bit. LOL THANK YOU THOUGH that means a lot 🥺💕 I'm glad that ppl can also enjoy even shorter little games like this. I'm so used to making sprawling stories -- even my Spooktober game was quite long. I sometimes have a hard time trying to think up ways to tell shorter stories,,,
GUHHH. They really are so dorky and dweeby and awkward and I love them so much, too ohhhHHHHHH. I'm so glad you enjoyed it 💕 LMAO FELT. I feel like that's me whenever I'm messaging literally anyone as I always second-guess everything I write or if someone takes even like a minute too long to respond I freak out and think they must hate me LOL
Thank you so so much for playing and writing up your thoughts! And thanks for the well wishes ahhhhhhhh,,, after this I shall dive full throttle into part 2 of Arc 5 I believe. I hope it will go well aldkfja Thank you again!! 🥰
LKDJFALSKDJFALKDSJFALKDS I AM TOUCHED YOU WERE SO EXCITED 😭💕 And helppppp I'm so glad you liked it!! This comment is putting such a smile on my face ahhHHHHHH TEARS IN MY EYEBALLS.
"OFFICIAL BIRTHDAY REVEALS HELLO" --> LOL WHOOPS I forgot I have never officially listed these anywhere HAHA. I have revealed Orlam's and Genzou's before on Twitter because I did art for their days, but since then I have completely forgotten 🤣💦
"I LOVE IT WHEN GENZOU THINKS OF WHAT HE SAID IS BAD SOME 'SHIT' STARTS FLOATING AROUND" --> KJDLFAKD I LOVE THIS PART TOO
"NEVERMIND THE CHRISTMAS PART IS THE BEST AND MOST HEARTWARMING PART IN THIS WHOLE GAME" --> HHHH I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. Every time I would play test that part I became very overcome with poignant heart squishing melancholy I must admit adlkfjadslkfa
"I DONT REALLY KNOW IF THERES A BAD ENDING SINCE THE FIRST GAMEPLAY I DID I GOT THE GOOD ENDING" --> LOL there is! You will get it if you answer too many choices in a way that makes Iggy annoyed or uncomfortable LOL
"#GENZOUXIGGY4EVER" --> MY HEART 😭💕
Hhhhhhh I'm really so glad ahhhhh thank you so much for playing and for this entertaining and tear-worthy comment that is both making me chortle and touching my heart lkdajlskdf 🥰
That was sweet and I really enjoyed it! I managed to get the good ending on my first playthrough. I guess being an anxious ace myself helped a little. Though I did get the "shit shit shit" reaction from Gen about 3 times, lol. Great little game!
Oh, my gosh, thank you!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!! 🥰 LMAO YOU SOUND LIKE ME LKDJFALKDSJFADS hahahahaha I-I guess those most similar to Iggy won't have too much of a problem with it 🤣💦 And lol some of the "shit" screens are inevitable -- if I remember correctly there's one you get no matter what on the September day, and also one you get right before the call. My idea for those was mostly that they happen when Genzou thinks he's screwed up -- and sometimes it's because he has indeed pushed further than he should have or didn't think enough before he texted, but sometimes it's actually OK lol. Though it's true that I think most of the times it's when he has indeed screwed up LMAO
Ahhhhh I'm really glad you liked it though! Thank you so much for playing and leaving a comment -- it really makes me wanna cry hearing from people! 😭💕
It was a really wholesome experience, and as someone who has played the base game, it was nice to get some more Genzou and Iggy content! I also managed to get the good ending the first try, but I will say that it's probably because I started responding similarly to how Genzou and Iggy usually interact in Our Wonderland. When you know Iggy a little better, you discover generic dating sim strat number #5 is not the way to go, so that helps with the interactions a little.
The game, despite being as short as it was, was extremely enjoyable, and I'm really happy I played it. :)
HHHHHH THAT'S SO SWEET HELP. Thank you so much for playing, and I'm glad as someone who's played the main game you could also enjoy this!! I worried a bit that it may feel too short or not good enough for people used to the long epic that is the main game LOL so that is really lovely to hear and I'm really happy you liked it!! 🥺💕
LMAO that's a good point!! 🤣 If you are more familiar with Iggy then you'll have a better idea how to message. "generic dating sim strat number #5 is not the way to go" --> SOBBING YES DAFKLJDALFKD That's a very good way to put it hahaha.
Thank you so much again and for taking the time to write up your thoughts! Ahhhh it means so much!! 😭
I loved this game so much <3333333333333 also random question is the "new years text" an ending? My game exited to the title screen after it and it wasn't clear what was going on (also I love this interaction) :
LOL YES THAT IS THE "BAD" END BASICALLY. That's a good point -- I should perhaps add in a little something there signifying it maybe. I didn't want to include the credits there as I thought it would be weird, and I was worried about adding more words since I'm already very close to the word limit for the jam ldakjfalskd but I can maybe come up with at least something to show that it's an official ending if you get that part.
THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR PLAYING THO AHHHHHH 🥺💕 That is very sweet. AND LOL I LOVE THAT INTERACTION TOO I am glad lkajfdlakfds 🤭
A really sweet tale to experience, not been in a predicament like this myself in person but I can only imagine how people feel when they have certain feelings for someone that they want to convey, but they do not want to come across too direct without feeling that they are going to hurt them in any way. The "sh*t sh*t sh*t" that appear on the screen works for both the character in game, but also as a game mechanic to convey to the player that a possibly bad choice was made in the multiple choice scenarios. Got both endings and hunting for the good outcome was well worth it to see what happens. Lovely game and makes me want to check out Our Wonderland even more now. Thank you Carrot! ^o^
Thank you so much again for recording this fun video!! I really loved watching it ldkajflkasdfa especially as I don't often get to see a lot of vids of my games. It was super sweet 😭💕 Hearing your commentary and thoughts was so fun and I'm glad you could still resonate with parts of it despite not having experienced the same time of predicament yourself!!
AND I HOPE YOU'LL ENJOY THE MAIN GAME WHENEVER YOU END UP PLAYING IT AHHHH 🥺
I had to do it three times to get the good ending and the first two times really hurt (well especially the first one since I thought I'd get the good ending)! Very cute anyway, I didn't know the original game and I kinda want to play it now so I get to spend more time with the characters.
OMG I'M SO SORRY IT TOOK YOU A WHILE LDAKJFALKDF It's true not all the choices are super obvious,,, and they also sometimes go against what you might think you should do because it's better to be like, patient and not quite so forward 🤣💦 Though you don't need to get ALL the right choices, just enough of them. And then also the two ones at the end though do need to be right (leading up to the call I mean).
Ohhhh I'm glad you liked it though!! That means a lot, especially coming from someone who hasn't played the main game?? (I don't always know how those who haven't played the main game will respond to the chars lkfajd) That's really sweet ahhhh. If you do end up playing the main game, I hope you'll like it! It's a rather different vibe LOL given that it's horror and rather intense while this is like a cozy little feelsy game hahaha. But it does have a lot of these two along with some sweet moments (and lots of figuring out to do in Iggy's case LOL).
Thank you so much again for playing and for writing up your thoughts! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! 😭💕
i finished both the endings and i gotta say the game is really nice. it was kinda refreshing to see the characters from our wonderland just living their daily lives without all the horrors from the main game, it helps understand their dynamic a little better. i think you also nailed the writing - the game is really short and consists (mostly) of only text messages, but it was easy to understand what kind of characters they were and the relationship they had - genzou's awkward half-flirting half-jokes, and iggy struggling to stay in touch with him (and being confused with his identity). also i love that "shit shit shit" appears all over the screen when genzou thinks he did something wrong, i wonder if that was also going through his head during the events of our wonderland lmao. the art is still probably one of my favourites also. good job with the game, looking forward to the next projects <3
Oh, my gosh! Thank you so much!!! Not only for playing but also for taking the time to leave a comment ahhhHHHH this is too sweet and kind 🥺💕 I'm really glad you enjoyed it?? LOL THAT'S WHAT I WAS FEELING A BIT TOO. Sometimes... sometimes even I need a break from everything going on in the main game hahaha. It's just A Lot. So a little feelsy romp without all the imminent death and horror is nice every now and again.
GUH I'M GLAD YOU ENJOYED THE WRITING. I had a lot of fun writing their interactions and thinking about how they might text but also had to mind the rules of the jam and the 1000 word limit (I really wish I could have made it longer as I would have loved to have even more situations... maybe in the future who knows) so I was also a bit worried and hoped I'd still be able to get enough across for people to enjoy it and their dynamic. LMAO THE SHIT ON THE SCREEN it is one of my favorite parts I'll be honest... it just felt too real for Genzou... he is trying his best even when it's hard for him LOL I-... I would honestly not doubt that that's also going through his head through most of the main game as well, all those times he feels awkward or regrets something he said/thinks he said something wrong LOL
At any rate, thank you again! 😭💕 I'm just really happy you enjoyed it as I was rather worried with how it would be received. I'm glad people can still enjoy this short little story with them as a small breather between the arcs of the game 🥰
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I love this!! I played the main game first and adored Genzou/Iggy there and this was such lovely further insight into their relationship :') It makes me want to replay the main game again! You've crafted some beautifully realistic charas here and I can't wait to see more of them, thank you so much for sharing your work!!!
Awwww thank you very much??? AHHHH YOU PLAYED THE MAIN GAME TOO??? I am extremely touched lkajdfad I am glad you like Genzou and Iggy, they are extremely precious to me LOL Hearing that others like them too squishes my heart 🥺💦💕 Your words mean so much and are going to make me cry just a little bit, so I'll just say thank you so much for playing and for letting me know!! It means the world!! 💕
Really cute. (:!
Ahhhh thank you very much!!! It means a lot that you played and enjoyed it!! 🥰💕
I text like iggs and it feels so awkward tryna be the other person 😅 I got ditched by them at the end 🙂
It was a cool vn, but I'm still stuck on why the supposed best friends are only texting each other once every few months...
OH GOSH I'M SORRY YOU GOT DITCHED AT THE END LAKDJFALSKDFA
I-it's a delicate balance trying to get the good end LOL Though if you get the text on December 23rd, you've basically almost got it, you just need to not rush him or say something sarcastic in the last couple of choices hahahaha
LOL they were best friends growing up and in high school, but drifted apart a bit after Iggy went away to college and also because Iggy's not very good at keeping up with relationships and so generally doesn't reach out on his own 💦 It's mostly Genzou trying to keep up the convos
because he's hopelessly in love with himtho at the same time assuming/accepting that it will never work out but still trying because he just can't quite let it go and also generally still wanting to be a part of Iggy's life no matter what lkajdfas(Admittedly also I would have liked to include more convos in between the ones given but I was limited by the word count, so had to just choose the most important ones to keep the story going.)
AT ANY RATE.
Thank you for playing!!! Ahhh it means a lot 💕
Short, sweet and cute visual novel in which you text your ace best friend, a guy whom you have a crush on. It's free, browser-based and charmingly written to fit some interesting constraints. 5/5 stars - outstanding.
Oh my gosh, thank you very much????? I'm glad that you enjoyed it!! That's such high praise and I feel honored to be given such a high score in your eyes 🥺💕 Thank you very much for playing and for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful write-up! It really means a lot!! 🥰
So, I finally played it. It doesn't feel like 1000 (sorry, 991) words at all and I'm simply blown away by how simultaneously long and short it seems compared to how long it actually is. The texts are amazing but also gave me The Feels so obviously now I have to give it a bad review and leave to cry (for legal reasons, this is a joke)
LMAO MAYBE BECAUSE I TRIED TO SQUISH THE SENTENCES AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE using like text speak dkljadkfa I admittedly did spend a lot of time towards the end comparing my current word count with what I still had left to do and cutting down words from sentences or extraneous lines to make room for where I needed others. IT WAS A BALANCING ACT 🤣💦 For real tho I wish I could have written a lot more as I was having so much fun with it and had ideas for a variety of other days' worth of convos that I had to forego.
ANYWAYS THO THANK YOU FOR PLAYING AHHHHHHHHHH. I AM SORRY FOR THE FEELS™ It gave me a lot of feels too while working on it and I may have choked up a little bit the first time I play-tested the last part guhhHHHHH. I just have.
Many many.
.......feelings.
About.
................Them. 😭💦
I am glad you enjoyed it though in spite of the Emotional Attack. Thank you so much for playing and taking the time to write up your thoughts I shall weep kjfadkfa 🥺💕
Amazing work as always!! Idk how you do it but your work is one of the best out there and I'm not even exaggerating.
Oh, my gosh! Thank you very much??????? Help this is such high praise lakjdlfaskdjfa 😭💦💕 That is such an incredibly sweet and nice thing to say, thank you!!!! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it (and my other stuff, too kaldjfalkdsfa) Thank you for all your support ahhhhh,,, 🥺💕
This is so cute! I love how the story's presented - the texting with the authentic-feeling pauses, then the spoken dialog in the dark, and finally the sprite and full dialog bubbles - such a special moment, to see the scene and sprite!
Even just in text message form, you could really get the personalities of each character. I really liked all the different responses that Iggy may send depending on what you (Genzou) chooses to say. My favourite was the birthday text, where he texts you the next day if you don't mention it.
I was curious about the other ending, so I played through a few times (totally loving all the potential responses), and I thought it felt pretty realistic. You can see why Iggy may have distanced himself or felt uncomfortable based on past texts. The characters just feel real!
This is the first time I've come across your work and I absolutely love it, and I can't wait to play Our Wonderland to get more of these guys! (I love dark horror-fantasy games!)
Oh my gosh, thank you??? That means so much 😭💕 I'm really glad you thought it felt very realistic!! That was one of my goals with trying to set up the texting screen to have some more of the like, notifs, and the wait time, and animations and such. So I'm glad some of that got across??? (Even if making it completely realistic would be mostly impossible and annoy people LMAO) I'm especially glad you liked the dialogue, I really had a lot of fun with it -- trying to translate their characters into their text speak and just making myself laugh a little bit with some of the funny and sweet interactions. I wish I could have had a bit more room to come up with even more, but the jam word count limitation stopped me LOL Maybe in the future though...
Ahhhhh oh my gosh you even played through all the choices I shall cry???? I wanted to provide a wide variety of different choices so I could have different types of convos play out and the endings (either good or bad) felt like they made sense, so that honestly makes me really happy to hear lkdajflak I'm so glad you liked the chars in general!!! I love them so much and think about them all the time 💦
AHHHHHH IF YOU DO PLAY IT I HOPE YOU'LL LIKE IT??? The main game, I mean. It's definitely a different vibe LOL but it has a bunch of these two in it, particularly around their relationship and also a lot about Iggy figuring himself out (sometimes through quite horrific means, but still...) I made this little short game because these two make me so happy and I just wanted to make something short and sweet for them as part of the jam 🥺💕
Thank you so much again for playing and for this lovely comment that just really made my day!!!!! And also if you do play OW I hope it will be enjoyable lakdjfasd 🥰💕
HAPPY 39???? BIRTHDAY IGGY!!!!!!!!!
cuz you know it said April 30th with the birthday thing
and with me its April 30th!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHFA ADKSFJASDFAJDSLF IT IS INDEED HIS DAY OF BIRTH
Omg,,, this is very sweet,,, 🥺💕
He would technically be 36 today!!! But in my head he will always be 31 as that is how old he is in the main game LOL 🤣💦
Thank you very much for wishing him a happy birthday, my heart is filled with love!!!
ah yes "indeed his day of birth"
I forgot to comment here lmao. THIS IS SOOOO GOOODDD!!!!!! I love Genzou/Iggy sosososososooooo muuuch!!! It was a bit funny to play considering I text like Genzou but act like Iggy. I will not leave my house even if it costs me my life, but I'll be damned if I don't send cryptic/annoying texts to the people I like. Also the cg was so cute! Nothing makes me happier than Genzou abd Iggy content so thank you, truly. Also congrats on creating The Ace Character. Iggy is the ace character ever for sure. I'm sorry this is incoherent, my brain is broken. Keep up the awesome work and take care of yourself!
HHHHHHH THANK YOOOOOOOULFKA JDKDFLDKFALDSJFAKDS I LOVE THEM TOO GUHHHHH... knowing that other people also love them fills me with a deluge of fiery tears that spew forth from my eyeballs in bursts of uncontrollable emotion lakdjfa 😭💦💕
GOD FELT I NEED TO LEAVE THE HOUSE MORE but I d-d-don't...
I'm really glad you liked it??? Thank you so much for playing and also this comment that is giving me life. Sometimes I just think about Genzou and Iggy and my eyes get moist. HELP THE ACE CHARACTER EVER FOR SURE god that is very high praise dlkajd I am glad that Iggy can be such a shining example of an awkward ace guy 🥺
THANK YOU AGAINNNNNNNNNN. It means a lot!!! 💕
This was fun!!! I like how the pauses in the game forces you to slow down and rly adds to the feeling of it being a real-time texted convo! Despite the pressure of waiting for a text
andmy bad habit of being a chronic ghoster lolit also kinda made me want to message my own friends again :PI fumbled a few of the choices here and there (and also wanted to see what Iggy's response would be to some of them) so I played a few times! I really liked genzou's birthday text scenes!!!! if you don't remind iggy he texts you the next day first and idk i just thought that was a nice touch!! Especially as someone who has had this convo (being iggy) with ppl multiple times lol
The transition from texting into irl with the snow was also wonderfully done too! And then how the menu screen changed!!! it made me smile :D
AHHHHH!!! Thank you so much for playing!!! And I'm really glad you liked it?? I definitely want to like... force a sort of slow-down, like, to give at least some semblance of a real texting experience and how it doesn't usually happen bam bam bam in a row. Though at the same time I didn't want to make it too annoying and slow it down too much, so I tried to find somewhat of a balance that I hoped would be ok 🤣💦 But I'm glad!! AND LOL I AM ALSO REALLY THE WORST WHEN IT COMES TO TEXTING. Which is where a lot of Iggy's side of the convos and his reactions came from tbh... 💦
Oh I'm glad you like the birthday scenes laksdjflakds those were some of my favorites, especially Iggy's flustered series of rapid-fire texts if you don't remind him LKDJALFKDS it still makes me laugh just thinking about it LOL I am also very bad at remembering birthdays and then feel guilty.
Ahhhhh and thank you!! I hoped the final scene transitioning to RL would feel very special after the texting part. It definitely made my heart squish a lot.
HHHHH just thank you again so much!! I feel very touched that you played the game and took the time to write up this comment!! It means a lot!! 🥰💕
I've just finished this game and it was really cool and wholesome I loved it !!! As an ace person it really made my heart melt and it was very very sweet.
I shared it around so that more people can play it ! The text bubbles and their animation and the "shit shit shit" part were really well craftet I'm impressed haha. The pictures at the end were cute and iI really like the design of the characters.
I'll check out your other games for sure, keep on doing them !
Ahhhhh thank you for playing??? I'm really glad you ended up enjoying it!! That means so much! Especially as a fellow ace hhhHhhhhhnnn,,, 🥺💕
OH MY GOD REALLY? OHHHHHH. You are too kind HELP. That is so sweet. And lol thank you!! I was really happy with Genzou's anxious "shits" LOLOL 🤣💦 I wanted a good way to get across his flustered second-guessing in a way that didn't take away from the texting itself and that felt a bit funny.
Thank you so so much!! It means a lot that you would play my game, and I'm just so happy you liked it! 🥰
this was so cute!!! the ending was so cute, i hope the lads got their food hahaha. huge fan of the changes in scene made possible between the texting interface, dialogue bubbles in the dark, and then the snowy background+sprite... i think it's a really cool way of doing something with the limitations!! + i too would be head over heels for someone who brought me a hot drink on a snowy day tbh <3. very sweet!!! (+ the artstyle is very fun too!!)
OhhhHHHHhhhhhhHHHH thank you very much!!! 🥺💕 I'm really glad you liked it?? LOL I HOPE SO, TOO. I like to imagine they did 😌 Re: the changing UI/scene stuff, I really had to think sometimes about the best way to set things up and make them feel "right" in my mind with the limited stuff I could do GUH so I'm glad you enjoyed that?? And I wanted the final ending to feel a bit special by having it be the only time you get to see a sprite,,,💕
SAME TBH. Maybe interjected too many of my not-so-secret self-indulgent weaknesses into here just a bit LOL
Anyway though I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks so much for playing and for leaving such a lovely comment! It really brightened my day!! 🥰
This was such a sweet and endearing game! The dialogue flowed so smoothly and helped give me an idea of the personalities of both characters with how unique their individual ways of speaking were.
And when I was able to see Iggy in person after saying all the right things, that was certainly a perfect way to end the game! The way you can see Iggy's nervousness show through his poses, as well as expressions, was a lovely touch to his sprite :> And the main menu image changing was very clever and a fun reward along with seeing Iggy in person! Overall, I can tell with all the unique GUI, speech bubbles, animations, and said main menu that you put a lot of love and heart into this, very well done!
Oh, gosh, this is so sweet!!! Thank you so much for playing and writing up all these lovely thoughts??? It means so much 🥺💕 I'm really glad you enjoyed their back-and-forths!! I had a lot of fun converting their normal interactions into texting form and thinking about how that might work LOL And ahhhhhh I'm happy you like the Iggy sprite! I thought it might be a cute way to have the good ending play out despite the majority of the game being texting -- as like a special little treat or something aldkjfalk 🤭
Thank you very very much!! A LOT OF MY HEART DID INDEED GO INTO THIS. MAYBE TOO MUCH GUHHH. But I'm really happy you liked it!! Thank you for taking the time to write this up ahhhh it's so lovely,,, 😭💕
I loved this so much!! The personalities of Iggy and Genzou are so clear in their texting styles, and the animations are all very well done; it really mimics the experience of actually texting! The ending CG is so cute too, the characters are always so expressive! I only wish I was as suave as Genzou!
AHHHHHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PLAYING AND FOR THIS COMMENT. You've really made my day!!! This was so sweet, ahhhh... 😭💕 I'm glad you enjoyed their texting styles LOL I had a lot of fun transforming their chars into how I felt they would text (and was also mildly too entertained by it at times... makes me wish I could make a much longer game like this). And that you liked the animations!! It gave me such a headache finagling a way to set everything up in the backend to make that happen (and then also troubleshooting it later LOL).
LKDJALSKDFA GENZOU IS PRETTY SUAVE. AT TIMES. When he's not being a jerk or saying something ridiculous maybe LOL But he tries very hard and is very sweet to Iggy and I justttttt wanttttttt them to beeeeeeee happppyyyyyyyyyyyy GUHHHHHHH.
Thank you so much again!! I'm really happy you played and enjoyed it!! 🥰💕
Such a fun and cute game. Amazing work as always, Carrot! (^▽^)
Oh, gosh, thank you very much!! Thank you so much for playing?? I'm glad that you liked itttttttt 🥰💕
As an awkward ace guy, playing this was a weird excercise in figuring out how to seduce myself. 10/10
HAHAHAHAHA that just made me choke from laughter a bit 🤣💦 I'm glad you enjoyed it ahhhhh, thank you so much for playing??? Happy I could provide such a Unique Exercise for you LOL 💕
The anxiety of texting was waaay more realistic than I expected!! The torture of waiting for a text...
Well done, this game looks incredible and it was only done in 7 days?! You really never cease to amaze, Carrot!
I GET SO ANXIOUS WHEN TEXTING SO OFTEN so maybe part of me wanted to recreate that a bit alkdjflkdsf I'd love to think about ways to go even further with it in the future now that I've got a basic system coded, but also I worry about people getting annoyed if they can't click through relatively quickly, so it's like... finding a balance maybe LOL but I am glad some of that got across 🤣💦
GOSH THANK YOU THOUGH AHHHHHHHHH. That means so much I will cry 😭💕 The hardest part was figuring out how to actually make it work with the texting animations and paused moments since it required a lot of multiple screens being shown at the same time and disabling keys lakdsfa but once I finagled the code for it the rest went mostly faster. Thank you so much for playing!!! Your comment made me really happy ahhhhh,,, 🥺💕
i am in love with this art style oh my gosh euihpweuh i loved this <3!
OH MY GOSH THANK YOUUUUUUU. I am so glad!!! That means a lot to me to hear ldkajflsdkfa I'm really happy you liked it, ahhhhh. Thank you for playing and letting me know!! 😭💕
This is the most isekai ass name of any game I've ever played
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA IT REALLY IS. I thought it would be very silly and fun and it makes me laugh whenever I think about it 🤣💦
I just finished one of the endings and this is so cute!! I really love the art style ^w^!
Oh gosh, thank you very much ahhhh!! 💕 I'm really glad you liked the game and that you like the art style?? I always worry if people will get turned off by the art style because it's a bit strange maybe LAKDJFLKAD Thank you so much for playing and for writing this comment! 🥰
as an aroace (mostly asexual) person myself this game made me happy about the asexual rep <3
I originally downloaded and played the og game that iggy was in and it made me happy, & more happy when I played this one!
(ps - offtopic if iggy was real I would hug him on the spot)
That makes me so happy to hear, ahhhhhhhhh!!! I was really hoping other aces would be able to relate or at least get some happy feels from this, especially as there's still so few games and stories in general that feature ace chars. Thank you so much for playing and letting me know -- it really makes me wanna cry! 😭💕
OH YOU'VE EVEN PLAYED OW??? DLKAJSLKDFA omg 💦 that makes me really very happy dlkajfldska I'm so glad that you liked it and that you like Iggy. I love him so very much 💕 I WANT TO HUG HIM TOO OHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
This comment is so sweet, thank you so much for writing it!! It really brightened my day!! 💕
SORRY FOR A LATE LATE REPLY BUT I MADE SOME IGGY FANART^^
(its my pfp for now :D)
OMG?????? OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! I can see it though it's very small and I can't seem to open it any larger LMAOOOOO but he looks very cute? Ahhhhhhhh.... that makes me really happy that you would want to draw himmmmmm 😭💕
Hello I am a player from China, so the translator is used below! It took me a little time to type the good ending, and I would say this game is really nice, and I noticed how cute it is that the two people holding hands on the cover after the good ending,But because I have limited English reading skills and am still a student, I haven't fully played the other two works yet, but I will definitely give it a try later when I have time, no matter how,I support your interesting work XD
Oh, my gosh!! Thank you so much for playing?? Especially when it was probably difficult to read everything?? That feels incredibly sweet, ahhhh 😭💕 And I'm very glad you enjoyed it!! Thank you so so much for taking the time to play and write up this comment! I'm glad you liked the new title screen after getting the good ending, too!! 🥰
Oh gosh if you do play my other games I hope you'll like them, too!! I feel so honored that you would take the time to try and read all my stories lakdjfalsdkf 💕
Its a very good game and i hope you come out with another one continuing the story! The only negative i can say is i didn't notice the save until i had to restart, maybe autosaves would be good. But instead of that it was amazing! A nice challenge would be 3 choices!
Oh, thank you very much!!! That means so much ahhhh I'm very glad you enjoyed it!! 😭💕 While not a direct continuation, technically the main game these chars come from, Our Wonderland, takes place 3 years after this. It's quite a different vibe though as it's a horror game, but it does still delve a lot into the relationship between these two and also Iggy's figuring out and coming to terms with himself and his sexuality (the main game is from Iggy's POV).
Oh that's not a bad idea!! 🤔 I'm not sure how to implement that in Ren'Py but I feel like it must be doable! I'll look into how I might be able to integrate this into the game, perhaps for each choice screen or something...
LOL THREE CHOICES omg,,, that would certainly up the ante HAHAHA. Maybe if I ever revamp and expand on this game outside of the jam 1000 words restriction, I could try that, hehe. It would certainly add an additional level of difficulty! 🤭 Thank you again so much for playing and for leaving this lovely comment! It means a lot!! 🥰
It took a while for the reply to load thank you for responding!
This gave my anxious demi butt enough serotonin to get through the week. Thank you for the amazing experience.
Oh, my gosh jflkdfa that's such a sweet thing to say ahhhhh 😭💕 I'M GLAD??? I'm really happy you enjoyed it!! Thank you so much for playing, this comment squished my heart 🥺
Me: being ace Also me: crushing on an ace Also also me: TIS A BLESSING FROM THE LORD!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHA A BLESSING INDEED I-I am so glad you could enjoy it 🤣 💕 Thank you so much for playing???
:| my name is ace lol
cant wait till they release being an autistic trans person in the US in 2023
HELP????? what does this mean ldsakjflakds
its a maymay
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Omg im gonna play this RIGHT NOW!!! but i thought genzou had a crush on him since middle school or smth??? ugh i love this game franchise
I LUV U CARROT!!!!
LMAO I MEAN... I feel like it wasn't until high school that Genzou himself actually understood it as a crush rather than complicated feelings he couldn't quite explain LOL
I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE THE CHARS GUHHHHHH. And I hope you enjoy the game!!! It's very short, but I hope it can be something cute for people to enjoy 🥰💕
Oh, okay. that makes a lot of sense.
and YES I DID LOVE THE GAME! i wonder if whenever genzou says "shit shit shit shit!!" whenever you send something like "<3" a bad thing... or is it good???
I forgot he was blind too (idk how i forgot) until iggy was like "don't you use speech to text?"
This feels like a calm before the storm though... i have a feeling part 2 of chapter 5 is gonna be rough.. very scared... and excited!!!
AHHHHH I AM GLAD LDKJALSDKFJA Hahaha I think of those instances like... moments where Genzou thinks he has said something wrong. Oftentimes this indeed was not the best thing he could have said, but there are a few unavoidable ones towards the end (like when you ask to call Iggy, for instance) that aren't actually bad but just Genzou being unsure (since he's used to accidentally saying the wrong thing aldkfjads).
LOL TECHNICALLY THE <3 IS THE WRONG CHOICE IN THAT INSTANCE. But it's not like you have to do each choice perfectly to still get the good ending, so it's also OK to pick that too (and I do find that interaction incredibly hilarious LOL) 🤭💕
CALM BEFORE THE STORM. I guess it's true tho... part 2 is going to be rough lkdajflda I hope people can like this short, sweet little story as a breather perhaps 🥺💦
At any rate, I'm really glad you enjoyed this!! And thanks so much for writing up your thoughts, it was really sweet and made me smile!! 🥰
OHH SHIT RLLY??? aw man sorry genzou... im setting him up for failure....
but yea i cannot wait for part 2 of arc 5 i literally logged in today to check lol
Oh, you KNOW I'm gonna play this in the near future. XD
OMGGGGGGGGG LKDAJFALSKDFJADS I AM VERY EXCITED 🤭💕
This game is quite short, but I hope you'll be able to enjoy it!!
AHHHHHH I played The Game TM and im kind of shocked this is less than 1k words?? Like,,, it feels like you somehow put more words in (but in a good way!!!) because I feel like i clicked every option trying to get the good ending (I may or may not have chosen the Bad Options for Funsies first lol) and also just to enjoy Genzou's little "shit shit shit" drift across the screen
I can def tell this is a self-indulgent project bc like wow you put so much effort into everything from the gui to the visuals to the coding and workarounds of the limitations and ahhhHHHH im just impressed you just put this much work into it so fast!! Really feels like im roleplaying Genzou to talk to Iggy which feels so odd??? Because im so used to seeing things from Iggy's POV so taking on the role of Genzou somehow feels enlightening??? Also Iggy just,,, freaking out at missing Genzou's birthday makes me feel guilty for choosing the "talk about birthday" option over the "nothing" option the first go around (but also ahhhh it was so sweet how Iggy was just freaking out and Genzou's all chill about it like "no problem i get that" because Iggys' relatable as fuck in this regard and seeing Genzou react that way was just A+++)
also I really like the ending scene!! I was trying my best to get it bc i know it existed and awww it was cute!! love the use of snow particles for the atmosphere and also how the main menu changes when you get the correct option (and the little visual changes like when Genzou calls Iggy or goes "shit shit shit" like gfhjgfhj im a sucker for the effort you put into this ahhhHHHH)
(also!! just as a PS!! if you're worried about the web version breaking i played through on that edition and it works perfectly!! didn't encounter any problems whatsoever ^^)
LKJAFLDSKFASDLF IT DOES FEEL LIKE A LOT IG. It could be because I tried to squeeze as much as I could into shorter texting-format phrases. Also there are some places where I use variables for repeated/looped parts, which helped a bit, too. I painstakingly kept track of the words in a Gdoc as I was going and had to keep editing down some parts or deleting the extraneous word here and there so I could expand on other parts that felt like they needed more weight alkdjfad The forced pauses also make things feel a bit longer in general perhaps,,, 🤔
"I can def tell this is a self-indulgent project" --> ALSO BECAUSE IT'S JUST PURE GENZY FLUFF LAKDSJFALSKDFA But thank you tho ahhhhhh,,, I used a template for the base messaging system, but kept adding more to it because I wanted to make it feel more realistic to the point that there's like 4-5 different things happening on the screen that you can't even see but that are happening behind the scenes LOL I-it required a lot of troubleshooting lfakdjfa
"Because im so used to seeing things from Iggy's POV so taking on the role of Genzou somehow feels enlightening???" --> LOL IT'S TRUE. This is the first time I've ever done something in a different POV than Iggy's (or third-person), so I did wonder how people would take to it. I thought it would be kinda fun and cute though kinda spinning things around,,, 🥺💕
"also I really like the ending scene!!" --> HHH THANK YOU. I had hoped it would be a sufficient little "yay!" moment for people for getting to the end ldkajflskdf
and of course not at all just me being even more self-indulgent and wanting to make a very cute and sweet scene that fits my exact aesthetic alkdjfasldI-I'm glad you enjoyed it 😭Thank you so much for playing ahhhh this comment made me smile a lot and I loved hearing your thoughts!! Oh, and that's great!!! I had indeed been a bit nervous about whether or not it would work well or there could be glitches, but it at least seem to be working for most people, so that's good hahaha 🤣 Thank you again!!! 💕
God how do you keep on pumping out such amazing quality feel good games XD
Loved it so much, just finished the good ending and wow you continue to show how much these dorky dweeby awkward boys deserve nice things. I love them so much. Every time the little shit shit shit animation came up I felt that, it's just like when I used to text my crushes XD
Hope you're doing well and wish you all the luck in your next game installment (even if it isn't an our wonderland related endevour)
KFLAJDSLKFJLSADKF FEEL GOOD GAMES?????????? HELPPPPPP this is sending me a bit. LOL THANK YOU THOUGH that means a lot 🥺💕 I'm glad that ppl can also enjoy even shorter little games like this. I'm so used to making sprawling stories -- even my Spooktober game was quite long. I sometimes have a hard time trying to think up ways to tell shorter stories,,,
GUHHH. They really are so dorky and dweeby and awkward and I love them so much, too ohhhHHHHHH. I'm so glad you enjoyed it 💕 LMAO FELT. I feel like that's me whenever I'm messaging literally anyone as I always second-guess everything I write or if someone takes even like a minute too long to respond I freak out and think they must hate me LOL
Thank you so so much for playing and writing up your thoughts! And thanks for the well wishes ahhhhhhhh,,, after this I shall dive full throttle into part 2 of Arc 5 I believe. I hope it will go well aldkfja Thank you again!! 🥰
OMGOMGOMG ITS HERE!!
( UPDATE HERE WHEN I FINISH )
SPOILERS AHEAD
- OFFICIAL BIRTHDAY REVEALS HELLO??? OMFGGG
- I LOVE IT WHEN GENZOU THINKS OF WHAT HE SAID IS BAD SOME 'SHIT' STARTS FLOATING AROUND XD
- GENZOU AND IGGY CALLING??? OMGGGG, THIS PART HAS TP BE THE MOST HEARTWARMING PART IN THIS GAME insertcryingemoji
- NEVERMIND THE CHRISTMAS PART IS THE BEST AND MOST HEARTWARMING PART IN THIS WHOLE GAME!
- ALSO WHY THE HEVK NOT MCDONALDS, MCDONALDS IS THE MOST FANCIEST PLACE IK SMH /J
- I DONT REALLY KNOW IF THERES A BAD ENDING SINCE THE FIRST GAMEPLAY I DID I GOT THE GOOD ENDING
- #GENZOUXIGGY4EVER
- btw I think I got like 2 shit reactions xd
- GREAT JOB CARROT THIS GAME IS HONESTLY SUPER GREAT! insertthumbsup
LKDJFALSKDJFALKDSJFALKDS I AM TOUCHED YOU WERE SO EXCITED 😭💕 And helppppp I'm so glad you liked it!! This comment is putting such a smile on my face ahhHHHHHH TEARS IN MY EYEBALLS.
"OFFICIAL BIRTHDAY REVEALS HELLO" --> LOL WHOOPS I forgot I have never officially listed these anywhere HAHA. I have revealed Orlam's and Genzou's before on Twitter because I did art for their days, but since then I have completely forgotten 🤣💦
"I LOVE IT WHEN GENZOU THINKS OF WHAT HE SAID IS BAD SOME 'SHIT' STARTS FLOATING AROUND" --> KJDLFAKD I LOVE THIS PART TOO
"NEVERMIND THE CHRISTMAS PART IS THE BEST AND MOST HEARTWARMING PART IN THIS WHOLE GAME" --> HHHH I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. Every time I would play test that part I became very overcome with poignant heart squishing melancholy I must admit adlkfjadslkfa
"I DONT REALLY KNOW IF THERES A BAD ENDING SINCE THE FIRST GAMEPLAY I DID I GOT THE GOOD ENDING" --> LOL there is! You will get it if you answer too many choices in a way that makes Iggy annoyed or uncomfortable LOL
"#GENZOUXIGGY4EVER" --> MY HEART 😭💕
Hhhhhhh I'm really so glad ahhhhh thank you so much for playing and for this entertaining and tear-worthy comment that is both making me chortle and touching my heart lkdajlskdf 🥰
a true masterpiece :D
HELP DALKJFALDSKFJALDKF THIS IS TOO HIGH OF PRAISE thank u tho ahhhhhh that's very sweet 😭💕
That was sweet and I really enjoyed it! I managed to get the good ending on my first playthrough. I guess being an anxious ace myself helped a little. Though I did get the "shit shit shit" reaction from Gen about 3 times, lol. Great little game!
Oh, my gosh, thank you!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!! 🥰 LMAO YOU SOUND LIKE ME LKDJFALKDSJFADS hahahahaha I-I guess those most similar to Iggy won't have too much of a problem with it 🤣💦 And lol some of the "shit" screens are inevitable -- if I remember correctly there's one you get no matter what on the September day, and also one you get right before the call. My idea for those was mostly that they happen when Genzou thinks he's screwed up -- and sometimes it's because he has indeed pushed further than he should have or didn't think enough before he texted, but sometimes it's actually OK lol. Though it's true that I think most of the times it's when he has indeed screwed up LMAO
Ahhhhh I'm really glad you liked it though! Thank you so much for playing and leaving a comment -- it really makes me wanna cry hearing from people! 😭💕
It was a really wholesome experience, and as someone who has played the base game, it was nice to get some more Genzou and Iggy content! I also managed to get the good ending the first try, but I will say that it's probably because I started responding similarly to how Genzou and Iggy usually interact in Our Wonderland. When you know Iggy a little better, you discover generic dating sim strat number #5 is not the way to go, so that helps with the interactions a little.
The game, despite being as short as it was, was extremely enjoyable, and I'm really happy I played it. :)
HHHHHH THAT'S SO SWEET HELP. Thank you so much for playing, and I'm glad as someone who's played the main game you could also enjoy this!! I worried a bit that it may feel too short or not good enough for people used to the long epic that is the main game LOL so that is really lovely to hear and I'm really happy you liked it!! 🥺💕
LMAO that's a good point!! 🤣 If you are more familiar with Iggy then you'll have a better idea how to message. "generic dating sim strat number #5 is not the way to go" --> SOBBING YES DAFKLJDALFKD That's a very good way to put it hahaha.
Thank you so much again and for taking the time to write up your thoughts! Ahhhh it means so much!! 😭
I loved this game so much <3333333333333 also random question is the "new years text" an ending? My game exited to the title screen after it and it wasn't clear what was going on (also I love this interaction) :![](https://img.itch.zone/aW1nLzExODc3NDE2LnBuZw==/original/p49jtT.png)
LOL YES THAT IS THE "BAD" END BASICALLY. That's a good point -- I should perhaps add in a little something there signifying it maybe. I didn't want to include the credits there as I thought it would be weird, and I was worried about adding more words since I'm already very close to the word limit for the jam ldakjfalskd but I can maybe come up with at least something to show that it's an official ending if you get that part.
THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR PLAYING THO AHHHHHH 🥺💕 That is very sweet. AND LOL I LOVE THAT INTERACTION TOO I am glad lkajfdlakfds 🤭
THIS WAS SO SWEET 😭😭😭😭
AWWWWW THANK YOU VERY MUCH 😭💕
A really sweet tale to experience, not been in a predicament like this myself in person but I can only imagine how people feel when they have certain feelings for someone that they want to convey, but they do not want to come across too direct without feeling that they are going to hurt them in any way. The "sh*t sh*t sh*t" that appear on the screen works for both the character in game, but also as a game mechanic to convey to the player that a possibly bad choice was made in the multiple choice scenarios. Got both endings and hunting for the good outcome was well worth it to see what happens. Lovely game and makes me want to check out Our Wonderland even more now. Thank you Carrot! ^o^
Thank you so much again for recording this fun video!! I really loved watching it ldkajflkasdfa especially as I don't often get to see a lot of vids of my games. It was super sweet 😭💕 Hearing your commentary and thoughts was so fun and I'm glad you could still resonate with parts of it despite not having experienced the same time of predicament yourself!!
AND I HOPE YOU'LL ENJOY THE MAIN GAME WHENEVER YOU END UP PLAYING IT AHHHH 🥺
I had to do it three times to get the good ending and the first two times really hurt (well especially the first one since I thought I'd get the good ending)! Very cute anyway, I didn't know the original game and I kinda want to play it now so I get to spend more time with the characters.
OMG I'M SO SORRY IT TOOK YOU A WHILE LDAKJFALKDF It's true not all the choices are super obvious,,, and they also sometimes go against what you might think you should do because it's better to be like, patient and not quite so forward 🤣💦 Though you don't need to get ALL the right choices, just enough of them. And then also the two ones at the end though do need to be right (leading up to the call I mean).
Ohhhh I'm glad you liked it though!! That means a lot, especially coming from someone who hasn't played the main game?? (I don't always know how those who haven't played the main game will respond to the chars lkfajd) That's really sweet ahhhh. If you do end up playing the main game, I hope you'll like it! It's a rather different vibe LOL given that it's horror and rather intense while this is like a cozy little feelsy game hahaha. But it does have a lot of these two along with some sweet moments (and lots of figuring out to do in Iggy's case LOL).
Thank you so much again for playing and for writing up your thoughts! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! 😭💕
i finished both the endings and i gotta say the game is really nice. it was kinda refreshing to see the characters from our wonderland just living their daily lives without all the horrors from the main game, it helps understand their dynamic a little better. i think you also nailed the writing - the game is really short and consists (mostly) of only text messages, but it was easy to understand what kind of characters they were and the relationship they had - genzou's awkward half-flirting half-jokes, and iggy struggling to stay in touch with him (and being confused with his identity). also i love that "shit shit shit" appears all over the screen when genzou thinks he did something wrong, i wonder if that was also going through his head during the events of our wonderland lmao. the art is still probably one of my favourites also. good job with the game, looking forward to the next projects <3
Oh, my gosh! Thank you so much!!! Not only for playing but also for taking the time to leave a comment ahhhHHHH this is too sweet and kind 🥺💕 I'm really glad you enjoyed it?? LOL THAT'S WHAT I WAS FEELING A BIT TOO. Sometimes... sometimes even I need a break from everything going on in the main game hahaha. It's just A Lot. So a little feelsy romp without all the imminent death and horror is nice every now and again.
GUH I'M GLAD YOU ENJOYED THE WRITING. I had a lot of fun writing their interactions and thinking about how they might text but also had to mind the rules of the jam and the 1000 word limit (I really wish I could have made it longer as I would have loved to have even more situations... maybe in the future who knows) so I was also a bit worried and hoped I'd still be able to get enough across for people to enjoy it and their dynamic. LMAO THE SHIT ON THE SCREEN it is one of my favorite parts I'll be honest... it just felt too real for Genzou... he is trying his best even when it's hard for him LOL I-... I would honestly not doubt that that's also going through his head through most of the main game as well, all those times he feels awkward or regrets something he said/thinks he said something wrong LOL
At any rate, thank you again! 😭💕 I'm just really happy you enjoyed it as I was rather worried with how it would be received. I'm glad people can still enjoy this short little story with them as a small breather between the arcs of the game 🥰
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